Looks really good, and there are real good sequences, as supposed in a storyboard. Nicely done.

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works for me. In my attempts to do story boards I've had very similar results in how the action was portrayed.

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clever.

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DAMN, thats a really good storyboard!

I don't really know what the animation world actually requires, but I can easily follow the action, the dialogue fits, and there's no confusion as to whats going on from board to board (which is the big thing for storyboards)

So, this be an awrsome storyboard

(btw, I'm still falling behind over here, I'm trying to think of some sort of "bonus" to add/give/draw/whatev' to you cause I feel like a "broken promiser", seeing as I said itd be done a few days ago, lol, wow how that turned out, I'm trying to BUILD bridges, not burn them, so yah, its been a crummy week. whats going on is I'm doing this 2 page comic (im not fast yet at full comic pages, lol) for a horror anthology and its due this weekend and I wanted it done last week but its taking longer than I expected as I had to redo a few things and I'm going all stabby now, so yah, I'm gonna throw in a "bonus", as soon as I figure out what, lol)

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Thanks! I was hoping I hadn't lost my visual storytelling after taking a break from comic stuff for so long.

(And no worries, you are forgiven. Seriously, no bridge burning going on here. I've been in the same boat, stuff happens and things get behind schedule. I'd much rather wait for a good job than have it rushed for the sake of getting it out of the way, you know?
So focus on your comic pages! )

heehee, thankya, I feel better now :-P

I seem to be the KING of stuff getting in the way and throwing me behind, lol. It'll be nice to be able to work on things at a normal pace again soon, lol :-P

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good job in here! its amazing how easy looks to follow

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Oh WOW WAY COOL

Thanks! I need to add some more to this xD